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beauty from the eternal

I know this looks like a finished version, but really I am still very open to critique and changes!

I knew there were some major issues that I couldn't solve with pen on paper, so I took the scan and redrew the letters in Illustrator. The "cannot be separated" seem forced, so after a million revisions, I connected heat and fire with "smoke". Now fixing little nuances of the letters and working with letter thickness. Any advice appreciated!

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