beauty from the eternal

beauty from the eternal - student project

beauty from the eternal - image 1 - student project

I know this looks like a finished version, but really I am still very open to critique and changes!beauty from the eternal - image 2 - student project

I knew there were some major issues that I couldn't solve with pen on paper, so I took the scan and redrew the letters in Illustrator. The "cannot be separated" seem forced, so after a million revisions, I connected heat and fire with "smoke". Now fixing little nuances of the letters and working with letter thickness. Any advice appreciated! beauty from the eternal - image 3 - student project