Website redesign

Website redesign - student project

Website redesign - image 1 - student project

^ this is the look of the page without any changes

Website redesign - image 2 - student project

^ and this is my concept how to improve that page


It is a Polish website so the description could be incomprehensible. I've been trying to change the typography using proportions and playing with opacity of colours. 

I would be grateful if you could give me some feedback, what I should focus on more or what are the weakest points of my concept.

Thank you for sharing your knowledge in this lesson!