We don't see things as they are...

We don't see things as they are...  - student project

Hello everyone! I'm Annemieke from the Netherlands and I'm very much interested in learning more about lettering. 

March 19 2013
I started with this rough sketch of a quote from Anaïs Nin...

We don't see things as they are...  - image 1 - student project

 Followed by this (still pretty rough) ink drawing...

We don't see things as they are...  - image 2 - student project

March 22 2013
After Neils comment, I changed the spacing and lettering like this:We don't see things as they are...  - image 3 - student project
March 26 2013
Here are my final pieces, edited in Photoshop CS 5. Which version do you prefer? (I have trouble choosing)

We don't see things as they are...  - image 4 - student project

We don't see things as they are...  - image 5 - student project

We don't see things as they are...  - image 6 - student project

 

We don't see things as they are...  - image 7 - student project

I love to receive some feedback! Thanks :-)