WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - student project

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 1 - student project
I am a illustrator based in Japan. 
I have been struggling a lot with style and making pieces too detailed. 
I took this course to "reshaped" my perspectives.

I was in Germany for 2 months last year. 
There is alot I want to draw within this topic. 
This class helps me alot in simplifying.

These are some of the things I listed:

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 2 - student project


I drew as random as possible, as I am used to drawing every single detail in my sketches daily. 

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 3 - student project


SET 1

I would like to know your opinions on these sketches I made here:

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Notes written in red are my own notes of what I need to change, but what do you think?


I have picked my favourite 4 and finalized the artwork in Procreate.

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 6 - student project


WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 7 - student project

However, I still do feel like there is something lacking in this set, I can't put a finger to it. 

Perhaps I was not taking enough time to understand? I'm not too sure. 

 

Update: 

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 8 - student project

 

 

 

SET2

wip: 

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 9 - student project

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 10 - student project
WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 11 - student project
WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 12 - student project

WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 13 - student project

Freestyling.

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WIP// Germany: Things I did in Mannheim to kill winter blues - image 16 - student project

Upon finish this pieces, I don’t think I would use Procreate for detailed( ?) borderless illustrations in near future. It took me quite some time to finish these. Might work on another set with a pair of fresh eyes. What do you think? i hope you enjoy them. 

 


Very thankful for this class. Thank you! For taking this time to look into this post!

Update
2APR2020: WIP
9APR2020: WIP

16APR 2020

Yesyesmonorail
Media Content Creator, Illustrator, Anim