Two Hand Drawn Scripts - Still A Little Rough

Over a photo.

Here's a version with texture added.

Here are some updated looks. I'm not overly happy with them yet so any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Until now I had become so used to just modifying existing typefaces that I had all but abandoned sketching. This class has been a wonderful reminder of the amazing possibilites of creating something from scratch.

These are still rough (so far I've only watched the first two videos). I would love to get any feedback I could as to which to pursue and any constructive criticism. Thanks!