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Travels through compositions

Advice always most welcome!

///Week 2////

Saturday in Prospect Park- trying to use the shaddows as leading lines

 

Candy Cane Tea- taking diagonals too far- perhaps?

With these two I was just playing with being more abstract- #3 might have been better in the first week's assignement 

18th & H

 El Anatsui's tubes- snapped this with my phone and it's blurry- anything to be done?

////Week 1////

Hi!  Sorry for the late post. I am a total beginner, but here are my attempts!  If anyone has time to share comments, I'd love to hear them!

The church door: 

Market tomatoes

Where should the subject of tomatoes be placed?

Framed palms and chandelier- The frame is very dark, not sure about this...

 

 Rope swing feet- I tired to place the feet in the upper right corner sweet spot. 

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