The unexpected news

Thank you so much for the lesson, Sensei! It was very interesting and I enjoyed it very much!

I attached my attempt for the assignment below, please have a look at it.

Please let me know what is good and what needs to be improved. I need to fail fast to learn faster. Please don't worry about harsh comments, please tell me everything that comes to your mind.

Thank you very much!

 

The unexpected news - image 1 - student project

 

The unexpected news - image 2 - student project