The Tragedy of the Widow Van Deventer | Skillshare Projects



The Tragedy of the Widow Van Deventer

Step 1:

I selected the fifth chapter from Steinbeck's Pastures of Heaven.  I love the push and pull with the mother and daughter.  Two women who are both so sympathetic and unabashedly awful at the same time.  This story can work with either woman being the protagonist or the antagonist.  

Step 2:

My final draft!

Step 3:

Logline:  A resolute widow must choose between clinging to her past life or destroying it to start anew.

Previous drafts:

Ok, after some formatting issues, I have finally completed my second draft and can show it to you the way I want to!

Thank you to everyone who reviewed my draft.  I have not yet returned the favor, but I will!


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