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Chris Baxter

Have you ever actually met anyone named McLovin?

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The Philosopher of Murder

Log Line: To become whole again, a doctor searches for the identity of his families killer but must do it with no memory of his past

Source Text: The Philosopher from Winesburg, Ohio by Sherwood Anderson.

Thank you all so much for reading and critiqueing my sceenplay.

FIRST DRAFT

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B4QhEysZt_26ajlzajBZQkNHbGs/edit?usp=sharing

UPDATE 2ND DRAFT

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B4QhEysZt_26aVNtaVpoVkpKTDQ/edit?usp=sharing

Re-worded the dialogue and broke up some of the dialogue with action scenes, sharpened the plot and fixed some typos.

Any input and feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much!

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