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The Final Flame

STEP 1: Selecting Your Text

Arlo Will

DID you ever see an alligator

Come up to the air from the mud,

Staring blindly under the full glare of noon?

Have you seen the stabled horses at night

Tremble and start back at the sight of a lantern?

Have you ever walked in darkness

When an unknown door was open before you

And you stood, it seemed, in the light of a thousand candles

Of delicate wax?

Have you walked with the wind in your ears

And the sunlight about you

And found it suddenly shine with an inner splendor?

Out of the mud many times

Before many doors of light

Through many fields of splendor,

Where around your steps a soundless glory scatters

Like new—fallen snow,

Will you go through earth, O strong of soul,

And through unnumbered heavens

To the final flame!

 

STEP 2: Drafting Your Screenplay

UPDATE: July 5, 2014 

Storyboarding draft for screenplay

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzbQKJVjDG8xNWZVeE5tWjlQb2s/edit?usp=sharing

UPDATE: July 13, 2014

First Full Draft

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzbQKJVjDG8xVjl5OVJfRHlWeFU/edit?usp=sharing

UPDATE: July 24, 2014

Final Draft

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzbQKJVjDG8xVXJxd1NqeWZzc3c/edit?usp=sharing

Thank you to everyone for all the feedback!  I've chosen to go without dialogue, but really fleshed out the descriptions to make it more understandable!  I hope you enjoy. :)

Thank you for your feedback!

STEP 3: Writing Your Logline

Tagline: When a homeless tarot reader looks for home, he brings inspiration to others' lives and to his own.

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