Temptation - student project

I didn't make many changes as I didn't get much feedback and wasn't sure what should be changed, I fixed the "p" in except and some of the issues I had with "temptation".

Temptation - image 1 - student project

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I think I need to tweak some of the curves, but this is my quote outlines using illustrator - would love some constructive feedback!  I'm new to skill share so not too sure how all of this works...

Temptation - image 2 - student project

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This is a really rough sketch.  I have been playing around with the layout a lot and am generally happy with this arangement.  Originally I thought about adding more flourishes around the type but I think this will be stronger without.  

Temptation - image 3 - student project