Update: Above is the final image for Summer Drive. I decided not to incorporate a strawberry. 

When I was a kid, my family and I would drive out into the country to pick strawberries every summer. Summer drives have always been one of my favorite memories.  In my next revision, I would like to add a strawberry into the phrase, but I would like to hear your thoughts on that. Is it needed? If so, what letter do you think is best? I want this piece to convey a tone of freedom and bliss. Is that coming across to you? I am also considering adding flourishes in my next revision. Any tips are appreciated! I'm really excited to finally be producing illustrated type! 

-Mary