Neil Tasker

Love Your Letters: Communicate Visually with Words

While the third sketch looks more polished, I think the second is more unique.  I'm into that one.
Although, if it were me, I'd make the center circle include something different that doesn't mirror the dino head above. Or, if you want to keep it- I'd find a way to express it differently so they didn't look like duplicates.

Excited to see how this turns out!

Thanks for the feedback. I find myself gravitating towards the 2nd sketch too, but I think for this exercise I'm gonna run with the third to work more on my lettering. I have an idea to put a cool image behind it in the final version to give it the same life that the dinosaur was there to do. We'll see what happens.

UPDATE 3/20
4. Fourth Sketch
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/3215ecc6" alt="Stand By Your Brand - image 1 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/3215ecc6 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/3215ecc6 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
Feels like its getting closer, but is not there yet. I think I'm done freehanding sketching ideas and will lay it out next on grid paper.
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3. Third Sketch
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/9bad8cfc" alt="Stand By Your Brand - image 2 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/9bad8cfc 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/9bad8cfc 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
2. Second Sketch
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/1f6cd20c" alt="Stand By Your Brand - image 3 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/1f6cd20c 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/1f6cd20c 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
1. First Sketch (nay, doodle)
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/40983e8e" alt="Stand By Your Brand - image 4 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/40983e8e 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/e11155c18b5603076a42ce3c65b37b48/40983e8e 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
This phrase was inspired by a personal love of streetwear and graphic shirts and as homage to the fans who rally behind their favorite designer and brand. I hope to incorporate the logo of the shirt brand I am currently develop when i"m not slaving away 9 to 5 into the bottom and use this design to soon print on shirts and rally those supporting this creastive endevour. I pride myself on my ability to draw dinosaurs and zombies etc., but never dared to touch any lettering, so please hit me with some comments.

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