Daniel Gonzales

ATA: The Art of Visual Storytelling

The amount of detail and atmosphere is beautiful, you definitely excelled with dramatic light and contrast. I think the perspective isnt that bad at all, a bit on the right side where the bed is might benefit from some tweaking in photoshop, but given the children book style, and the drama of whats happening and the angle of the light and shadows, it's not too bad.

I love this, I can totally imagine this little boy getting up in the middle of the night, inspired by the moon to place space man.  I like how the details in the room tell you how much he loves space. If you wanted to pull it in closer you could change the positioning of the bed to be under the window and have him kneeling right in front of the window flying the space shuttle, then we'd be on the adventure with him? That's just an alternative idea, I actually like what you've done here quite a lot :)

Hi All,
Here's my contribution.&nbsp; I'm not that great at perspective and I know it, but I would like to get better.&nbsp; I also don't use value contrast much in my illustrations, so I wanted to try that out for a change as well. I've been watching alot of Star Trek lately on Netflix, and I was reminded of how we all dream as children of some grand adventure.&nbsp; I'm guessing Buzz and Neil probably looked up at the moon as children and dreamed about it.
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