Daniel Gonzales

ATA: The Art of Visual Storytelling

Nice idea using such a long composition! Really helps show how frightful the weather is, and how small and vulnerable Mrs. Groundhog is through it. I think maybe the trees are too vertical, and could use some variety to lead the eye along more than just a down path, but it's a fun idea that works well.

Thanks for the note Ian! I had experimented with possibly curling the top of the trees over slightly to lead the eye more toward the character, and though I did like some aspects of that design it didn't feel quite as harsh as the vertical lines. Almost like the trees were shielding her from the elements. :) Thanks Again! I might have to go back and experiment some more to see if there is a happy medium.

<p><img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/26dd0daddea10408e94530d22d8e42bb/97d239bb" alt="Snow Day - image 1 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/26dd0daddea10408e94530d22d8e42bb/97d239bb 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/26dd0daddea10408e94530d22d8e42bb/97d239bb 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy"><br><br>Mrs. Groundhog is sending a letter to Mr. Groundhog who is working down south for the weather man.&nbsp;</p>


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