3/26
After reviewing the great feedback from the fellow classmate, I made a little change to my initial sketch.
I reconsidered if I really needed the mother on the left, and decided to take her out because the main focus here is the girls in the middle.
I also added the floor perspective to lead the viewers to the middle.

Any thoughts/suggestions are welcome! :)
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3/25
Hello everyone! I'm a little late to start and this is really rough sketch but I wanted to share and get some feedbacks!
This is a story of me and my sister when we were little. My sister dropped a bowl when my mom told her to be careful... she started crying and little sister, me :), came up to her and patted her head to make her feel better.

I don't know if the story crosses the viewers and would love to hear what you think! Any suggestions/thoughts/advice is greatly appreciated!!
Thanks :)
-Junko