I have made some adjustments per your suggestions and added color and lighting textures to help emphasize that "Dude" is in the band and trying to crowdsurf his way back to the stage. I'm really just trying to convey this story visually in hopes of finding a more qualitifed artist / animator to help me develop this project.
Click Here if you'd like to see the full sequence, as this frame is intended to be a still photo shot during the band's performance. Your feedback and suggestions are much appreciated. Thank you again.
Here is the first draft for my single image project. I look forward to your feedback. Thank you.