Erica Swallow

Startup PR: Getting Press on a Tight Budget

Hi Tammy. Although this reads more like a wish list than a pitch, it's quite charming. It wouldn't work very well for getting press, as it's not focused on what you currently do, but it makes good sense for a future plan. :) I would rewrite it to sound more like: 

"Simply Couture Events is a wedding planning company that puts all the focus on the bride. While we currently focus on _______, we're paving way towards opening a "one-stop shop" shopping venue where brides-to-be can find all of their wedding must-haves, as well as celebrate with their bridal parties."

It's a bit rough, but I just wanted to give you an idea of something that sounds more concrete, like it will actually happen. :)

Good luck with your business!
Erica

<p>Simply Couture Events LLC is just that...and Event Planning company. I would like to create a one of a kind, unique, 'one stop shop' event planning company where all the focus is on the bride and she feels special. Eventually I would like to take my company to the next level and open a store where the Bride can come in to do her shopping. Also, I want to have an area where the Brides can celebrate with her Bridal party if she desires.</p>


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