Simpler Time Deodorant

Simpler Time Deodorant - student project

Here are 2 different directions, would love feedback.Simpler Time Deodorant - image 1 - student project

Simpler Time Deodorant - image 2 - student project

I used to buy real deodorant. You know, the kind you find in a store. But it didn't work. I still stunk and my shirts got pit stains on them. It's not pleasant, but it's true. A few months ago, I tried an old recipe for homemade deodorant. And it works! I want to create a label to give this as gifts to friends and family as an ode to the good old days when products performed as advertised.

Would love any feedback.

Inspiration jpg is included.Simpler Time Deodorant - image 3 - student project

Here is the small (5oz) glass bottle the label I design will attach to:

Simpler Time Deodorant - image 4 - student project