Eddy Tritten

Obsessive Compulsive Designer

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Samurai & Lady bird

Hello folks and thanks Fraser for this course and sharing your knowledge. So today I started this project and I'd like some help/feedback because I'm struggling with the lighting, the color and the weight of the lines.

May be going for a complex shape like this ladybird as a first practice exercice wasn't a smart choice.

Here are the steps:

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EDIT 01/10/2015: I made this one today for more practice, the main problem with the ladybird is that it doesn't look like a logo hehe.

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This one is more satisfying but in term of composition a feel a bit guilty using the overused shield. My girlfriend pointed me that he looks like a fireman ahah, which is true actually!

I apologise for my English and as I said I welcome any feedback, occasionally you can even throw tomatoes ;)

Cheers,

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