Christopher Tester

The Business of Voiceover: How to be a Working Voice Actor.

Ah nice one Chris really appreciate the feedback!Yea I totally get that demos line, I've updated my draft mail accordingly.It would actually be my preference as well to have the signature text next to the pic but I was having kittens trying to make it work.. I couldn't have them adjacent to eachother and keep the email and web links active (in gmail), so they wound up below.Thanks again for the course I've found it really helpful. I sent the first newly written emails off today to new leads and got some nice responses.. so onwards and upwards.Sam

Really nice work Sam!Only a few pointers, which are subjective so feel free to ignore/tailor:1) Replace 'You can learn more about me and the voices' with something that mentions that your demos are readily downloadable from your site. This can make a client's life so much easier, so flag it up!2) I'd place the info in the signature next to the photo on the right rather than below, so they don't have to scroll so much.Great work though - well done.

Hi Chris, thanks so much for putting on this course here's my submission. Annoyingly the signature cut off at the bottom so here it is below:
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