Rock Poster for "Band of Horses"

Rock Poster for "Band of Horses" - student project

I have used halftone patterns to reduce the number of colours to 4 for screen printing purposes. Still need a few 'distress' passes and the title needs lots of work, but I'm happy so far.

Rock Poster for "Band of Horses" - image 1 - student project

Update 1:

The use of the pink as an overprint for the window shading felt too heavy and ominous, so I've dialled that back.

Rock Poster for "Band of Horses" - image 2 - student project

And given the text a bit more of a considered and intentional look:

Rock Poster for "Band of Horses" - image 3 - student project

Update 2:

So the final image is like this, unless anyone has some recommendations for what needs fixing and flexing?

Rock Poster for "Band of Horses" - image 4 - student project

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