Rift: Create a Setting

(Note: The story is in the form of a webcomic, so I won't be able to explain my setting in words. But I'm doing it the right way for the project, just so I get a chance to.)

First line:

An office building in the city with a white owl insignia at its front.

Be more specific:

A small office building stood in the middle of the city, a white owl insignia at its front. 

Create action: 

A small office building stood in the middle of the city. A white owl insignia at its front. The insignia gleaming from the midday sun. 

Use adjectives that convey a mood:

Amid a city occupied by expensive and towering establishments stands a small, geometric office building. At the top of its limestone construction lays a gleaming insignia of a white owl, wings out.

Explore the others senses:

Amid a city occupied by expensive and towering establishments stands a small, geometric office building. At the top of its limestone construction lays a gleaming insignia of a white owl, wings out. Many pedestrians can be heard commuting to work, but all traffic seems to avoid the small building.

Add the potential for change over time:

Amid a city occupied by expensive and towering establishments stands a small, geometric office building. At the top of its limestone construction lays a gleaming insignia of a white owl, wings out. A less permanent "NOW HIRING" sign could be seen below. Many pedestrians can be heard commuting to work, but all traffic seems to avoid the small building.

Use active verbs:

Amid a city occupied by expensive and towering establishments stands a small, geometric office building. At the top of its limestone construction lays a gleaming insignia of a white owl, wings out. A less permanent "NOW HIRING" sign could be seen below. Many conversations can be heard, as much of the populous start commuting to work, but all traffic seems to avoid the small building.

Place your protagonist into the scene: 

Atlas walked through the city alongside many other pedestrians making their way to work. Many expensive and towering establishments could be seen as Atlas admired the view. (Note: This is Atlas' first time in a very large city.) But Atlas' excitement fades as amid these skyscrapers stands a small, geometric office building. At the top of its partly limestone construction lays a gleaming insignia of a white owl, wings spread. A less permanent "NOW HIRING" sign confirmed to Atlas that he was in the right place. Remnants of conversation could be heard as more employees enter the neighboring buildings. Strangely, all traffic seems to avoid the small office, making it seemingly abandoned.

 

Question: Should I create another project for the inside of the office. If so, just let me know, and I'll create another project. Thank you in advance.