Progress 2.0

Progress 2.0 - student project

SECOND RUN (I am yet to draw my organic form, I have been practicing with complex man-made figures.) I used modelling clay again, that's why some shapes look irregular. Do you think I am ready for the gesture course, teacher? Or what should I focus on? 

Progress 2.0 - image 1 - student project

This one looks truly bad, but it inspired me to create the following ones.Progress 2.0 - image 2 - student project

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(This picture and my drawing have different shadow conditions, for I used my phone for both things. Which means I had to move it.)
Progress 2.0 - image 5 - student project

I just realized my cast shadows do not have the same value. I tried to make one of them look farther away, but the two characters in front should have the same value. Progress 2.0 - image 6 - student project

 

FIRST RUNProgress 2.0 - image 7 - student projectProgress 2.0 - image 8 - student project

Highlights cannot be seen in this one. Should I try another photo? Progress 2.0 - image 9 - student project