Ok, I did add some red and green there. This was difficult for me as I really don't like painting monochromatically. I love drawing that way with graphite, but for some reason I just think "grisaille" underpainting when painting black and white. I was going for a more stylized approach. I like the concept, the execution is ok. I hope the next to be better as I'll be using more professional gouache ( Holbein vs Himi I've used this time ) and better paper ( Arches or Fabriano vs. Canson which I have a hate relationship with ) How are your experiences with papers and brands?