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Peripeteia

PERIPETEIA PROJECT POSTER - By Lo Ki

Peripeteia Poster #2 - By Lo Ki

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STEP 1.

Source:

Spoon River Anthology by Edgar Lee Masters

"George Gray"

I HAVE studied many times

The marble which was chiseled for me—

A boat with a furled sail at rest in a harbor.

In truth it pictures not my destination

But my life.

For love was offered me and I shrank from its disillusionment;

Sorrow knocked at my door, but I was afraid;

Ambition called to me, but I dreaded the chances.

Yet all the while I hungered for meaning in my life.

And now I know that we must lift the sail

And catch the winds of destiny

Wherever they drive the boat.

To put meaning in one’s life may end in madness,

But life without meaning is the torture

Of restlessness and vague desire—

It is a boat longing for the sea and yet afraid.

Focal point in source: 

To put meaning in one’s life may end in madness,

But life without meaning is the torture

STEP 2.

FINAL DRAFT!! : 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B903byidjraaN3lzdk5vejJvb0U/edit?usp=sharing

DRAFT #6 ( NEW ) :

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B903byidjraaWVR3eU82cEo1LTA/edit?usp=sharing

DRAFT # 4:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B903byidjraacXRZcW5ERnZJM0E/edit?usp=sharing

DRAFT # 3:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B903byidjraaSFdjb0p3UmRMc0k/edit?usp=sharing

Draft # 2:

New Draft (formatted):

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B903byidjraaNHJZVzg2MG9vWEE/edit?usp=sharing

Peripeteia

I appreciate all feedback, and look forward to creative partnerships! Thank you in advance.

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STEP 3.

Logline: 

Suspended at the crossroads of an uncertain future, an ambitious young painter is torn between pursuing his passion and the promise of stability at an advertisement agency.

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