Pencil portrait

Pencil portrait - student project

Pencil portrait - image 1 - student projectthis is my third attempt... I didn't publish the first two because I totally wasn't satisfied.
Still, I'm not satisfied '^_^ and I think I'll try again and again and I'll add.
Critiques are welcome!!!! :) 

 

UPDATE: 2nd attempt

Pencil portrait - image 2 - student project

Now that I look behind, I think I made some mistake in the very first passage... maybe the shape of the eyes, I don't know? What do you see that I can't see?

Final result

Pencil portrait - image 3 - student project