Caleb Warren

Visual Designer

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Online Bulletin Sign-up Form

Decided to improve the microcopy of a signup form. This signup form is for people to sign up to receive Neighborhood Church's bulletin via email every week. This form was created using Wufoo.

Before

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After

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Here are some of the changes I made:

1) I added a description under the header "Online Bulletin" to give people more context as to what the online bulletin is. By adding "Fill out this form," I was able to make it even more clear for the user as to what they need to do. I also added "every Friday morning" to further show what will happen when they sign up.

2) I added a side note next to the email field. Since people have multiple email addresses, I thought it would be good to distinguish that whatever email they enter will be the one that gets the weekly bulletin.

3) Lastly, I changed the "Submit" button to say "Sign me up!". This feels more exciting, friendly, and more clear as to what will happen once a user finishes this form.

Thanks for checking out my project! 

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