Fatih H.

Graphic Designer

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Online Book Store - Registration Form Microcopy

I used to buy some books on this online bookstore. So, i decided to create some microcopy on the register page. 

*Opentrolley online bookstore

Here is the screenshot for the real register form page:

BEFORE

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as you can see, there is no feedback in the form. Except one the "Enter correct Email" message, which is a bit not nice.

AFTER 1

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WHAT'S CHANGING?

  1. Title: 'Register' to 'You are one step away to your favorite books!'.
  2. Feedbacks for the form, see the salutation choosed is 'Mr.' then all the feedbacks I put "sir" on them.
  3. More personalised (inner voice) for newsletter text, and the submit button.

AFTER 2

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The second is for the fully filled form, and ready to go to customize the book recommendation for the user!

And.. the UX now is much better by improving the microcopy now!

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