New Age G Funk

I'm attempting to create a track that can hold its own among the great G-Funk classic. I made the beat on Logic Pro X, here is the rought version: 

https://soundcloud.com/mike-r-webb/in-the-nite-hour-whurl-wide-remix-rough-cutlogicx

Here is the Mastered Mix:

https://soundcloud.com/mike-r-webb/in-the-mid-nite-hourworld-wide-remixfinal-master