My Structure

Passion:

I believe there would be less crime committed in the world if there was more voices being heard, more actions taken, and to give help without expecting a reward.

 

Theme:

There is always another side to a story. To listen, act, and help your fellow man.

 

Bebo's flaw:

Prejudice when it comes to criminals. He believes once a felon always a felon. He believes there is no such thing as redemption.

 

Premise:

Even a criminal (current/past) can change.