Christopher Tester

The Business of Voiceover: How to be a Working Voice Actor.

Hi Will - nice job. First paragraph is a nice observation that eludes to why their content is effective without going overboard.The framing of the second paragraph is where I'd be careful. Two sentences both starting with a qualifier doesn't sound very direct or confident, and kinda gives the impression that you'll work with them only when the stars align (if/if/hope). The observation is also centred around the project you originally commented on rather than voiceover work in general, which I think can be dangerous. Though they might logically conclude from the email that you're a full-time VO, don't leave them the room for doubt.There's some key info here you're not making explicit. Do you have a home studio? Do you have expertise in the lead's area of work? Can you offer them a demo read quickly? Frame yourself as a resource for the future rather than someone who'd be up for having a go on adding to an existing campaign. And why not simply mention that your demos are downloadable from your site rather than asking them for permission? Then they can download if they want, just keep the email or make a note of the website address - whatever their filing system is. Oh - so on that note, make your web address a clickable and copy-able link.Logo - very nice and clear. I'd say if you incorporate the right image, it would be more memorable though? Very nice - just some points to bear in mind. Hope that helps and let me know if anything is unclear.Chris

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