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Mr Curl E. Braces (feedback wanted)

Hi, just interested to get some feedback on this, because I think some parts are okay, but feel like there are some annoying loose ends (especially bottom right) that I can't work out. Any principles on how to deal with that bottom corner bit appreciated.

This was just a simple test. I'm teaching C programming to teenagers and thought I'd personify curly braces to make a point about where they go. Have outlined a few of the iterations below:

NOTE: Borders are just so you can see the dimensions of the white business card

1. Just getting the text on the page:

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2. Adding the braces in question (seemed like an obvious choice)

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3. First attempt at arranging elements

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4. Added a few C programming things like the "//" to indicate a comment and of course it's all punctuated since I've talked about the braces as having a punctuation function:

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5. removed punctuation and changed locations somewhat

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6. Feel like this is the best attempt, but not sure. Still feel like something isn't quite righ witht the bottom right corner and welcome feedback:

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