Mine's a pint

Mine's a pint - image 1 - student project

OK, So there's loads wrong with this but it's as final as I have it at the moment. any feedback is much appreciated. As you can see, I'm having particular difficulty with the 'e', 'a' and the stresses on the flourishes but any advice is welcome

Cheers guys!

Mine's a pint - image 2 - student projectBringing two o my favourite things together, lettering and having a beer in the pub with a mate. Considering adding some sort of boozy graphic to it, not sure how though.