Neil Tasker

Love Your Letters: Communicate Visually with Words

great work and progress! This is really nicely balanced and has nice connections and flourishes, love that g tail and how it is also forming into the dot of the i. I agree that I would like the see the M descender come down a little farther. Great work! Also the E in the something needs to be turned a little bit, it is leaning back just a bit.

My only critique would be to make the left descender of the M to drop further

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Almost ready to go digital. Looking at this now my T and S look too big but I'm happy with the new weight thickness. I would love to hear any feedback!&nbsp;
<img src="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/cfb7a7d2f176cc302be2579b56a2e5b7/387793e2" alt="Make Something Today - image 1 - student project" srcset="http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/cfb7a7d2f176cc302be2579b56a2e5b7/387793e2 600w, http://s3.amazonaws.com/skillshare/uploads/project/cfb7a7d2f176cc302be2579b56a2e5b7/387793e2 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
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Hi all!! I wanted to make something to hang in my office to help inspire me so I chose "Make Something Today". I've been inspired by Copperplate calligraphy lately so I may add the thick and thin strokes like that style.&nbsp;
<img src="http://cl.ly/Nhbn/Screen%20Shot%202013-03-20%20at%2012.34.38%20AM.png" alt="Make Something Today - image 2 - student project" srcset="http://cl.ly/Nhbn/Screen%20Shot%202013-03-20%20at%2012.34.38%20AM.png 600w, http://cl.ly/Nhbn/Screen%20Shot%202013-03-20%20at%2012.34.38%20AM.png 1000w" sizes="(max-width: 600px) 600px, 100vw" loading="lazy">
This is the beginning of my lettering piece - when I put it in a grid. I have to change some letters so they curve with the grid a bit more but I'm happy with the layout and my early swashes.&nbsp;
I would love any feedback!&nbsp;

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