Loudmouth or Loud Duck?

Loudmouth or Loud Duck? - student project

I updated my illustration based on feedback. Moved the ducks up, changed their expression, removed the giant geometric shape and added some text ("quack") to the text bubble.

Any feedback is welcome - don't really have ideas for texture yet.

Loudmouth or Loud Duck? - image 1 - student project

OLD:

Loudmouth or Loud Duck? - image 2 - student project

Original idea (very rough):

Loudmouth or Loud Duck? - image 3 - student project