Lost (Short)

Lost (Short) - student project

When a boy wakes up alone at night, strange happenings lead him to believe he may not be alone after all.

I have done this a few times before - not great results. So I challenged myself to use little to no dialogue with minimal characters and in very few locations. This is the result:

Draft 1: https://www.dropbox.com/s/0t1b1n7vot3zuex/Untitled%20-%20ii.pdf?dl=

Draft 2: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1__v0S2DljgG2dsrJbidDNjueaA5IGba9/view?usp=sharing

Draft 2.1: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uJb6_hIUlNWdCIB8Dg6C492ztJNno6nR/view?usp=sharing

Any suggestions on any aspect welcomed (incl. title, logline etc.) and please let me know if the link isn't working.

I plan on making this into a short film in the not to distant future.