Linkedin Optimization

I was serving landing page designs for health and wellness coaches and i have hard time acquiring client because of my personal interest is not into coaches. 

Before Offer Statement

I create Lead generating and Conversion focused Landing Page for service based business

After Offer Statement

Helping business owners (at-home fitness equipments)  increase their conversions and sales by creating conversion focused Shopify e-commerce store design.

Note: I
don't know if my target market are hanging out in Linkedin.

Remove IT network support experience

Should i leave my startup experience?

I have a travel startup before covid19.