Teacher Finch, I am sorry that my pencil was not sharpened enough. Waiting for the new pencil sharpener to arrive. Anyway. On top of getting the facial expression right, my struggle was to be consistent with the head, proportions and the gender. The facial expressions are not good. I have to understand the facial muscle movement and how it will effect the face. Hope you can give me tips & tricks. I also hope you can show me where I went wrong.