Updated Feb, 25th 2013
After - I really just removed the chocolate from around his mouth and de-saturated the girl in the background. I also now notice that I lowered the shadows a bit much - his helmet looks nicer in the before... whoops!
And now...I can't figure out how to upload any more originals because they're all in RAW and way too big :/ But a few more that I edited:
I really did learn a lot from this class...I also learned that Lightroom can only fix so much, you have to shoot well to start with! That I'll improve with in time...