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Knowlt Hoheimer

I chose Knowlt Hoheimer because I love the line Than to lie under this marble figure with wings! Now I just need to write it!

I was the first fruits of the battle of Missionary Ridge. When I felt the bullet enter my heart I wished I had staid at home and gone to jail For stealing the hogs of Curl Trenary, Instead of running away and joining the army. Rather a thousand times the county jail Than to lie under this marble figure with wings, And this granite pedestal Bearing the words, "Pro Patria." What do they mean, anyway?

Update 06.30 I wrote out the scenes on a beat sheet. Its my first time using a beat sheet and Ill post it soon for feedback before writing my script.

Updat 07.24 My first versions on the way!

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