Keep Me Where the Light Is

I've decided to create a phrase that I've wanted to illustrate for a while rather than a logo for a business. I won't get the varied typography of the vintage style, but will get most of the vector challenges I think.

Here's my starting point as I head to the computer, perhaps a bit prematurely but I want to keep this moving forward and think I can do that better in Illustrator.

So there are some areas that are pretty nasty in each of these I know, most notably that g-h of "Light." I'm just not sure how to terminate some of these letters so feedback is appreciated.

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