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Tony Martinez

I'd ride my pony on my boat- Lyle

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Joaquin Sosa Sequin

Hopefully this is the******FINAL DRAFT7******Maybe********************

Logline;  Joaquin is a man without a country in search of the promise land.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxYTD2iGb0zRN1QtbEpMaXZuUzA/edit?usp=sharing

DRAFT 6

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxYTD2iGb0zRQzF3SE42eUFjUnc/edit?usp=sharing

**********************Draft 5***************

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxYTD2iGb0zRa0V1dWhLajBGZHc/edit?usp=sharing

Closing credit song just for grins----Don't Fence Me In.  Bing Cosby and the Andrew Sisters.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vMnLoOnrwbg

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Here is the poem: From Spoon River Anthology by Edger Lee Masters

Jack McGuire

THEY would have lynched me

]Had I not been secretly hurried away

To the jail at Peoria.

And yet I was going peacefully home,

Carrying my jug, a little drunk,

When Logan, the marshal, halted me

Called me a drunken hound and shook me

And, when I cursed him for it, struck me

With that Prohibition loaded cane—

All this before I shot him.

They would have hanged me except for this:

My lawyer, Kinsey Keene, was helping to land

Old Thomas Rhodes for wrecking the bank,

And the judge was a friend of

Rhodes And wanted him to escape,

And Kinsey offered to quit on

Rhodes For fourteen years for me.

And the bargain was made.

I served my time

And learned to read and write.

First Draft*******

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxYTD2iGb0zRM0JMLXdISFdtR2s/edit?usp=sharing

******HERE IS DRAFT TWO*******

Finally added four pages to the script.  Took me a few hours.  Please let me know if you like the added pages and what I can do to fix it.

Logline;  Joaquin is a man without a country in search of the promise land.

https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BxYTD2iGb0zRXzR5SlpaNWlkcWc/edit

DRAFT THREE

Logline:  Joaquin is a man without a country in search of the promise land.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxYTD2iGb0zROWh6d0VKSUdmOXc/edit?usp=sharing

Changed last line of dialouge

Hopefully this is my Final Draft.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BxYTD2iGb0zRa0V1dWhLajBGZHc/edit?usp=sharing

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