Jes's drawings

Jes's drawings - student project

Jes's drawings - image 1 - student project

Here is my drawing for the shading lesson. I don't have procreate so I used watercolors.

I was drawing from a reference photo that I took. The light was very complicated, and I am not sure I got it right.

I'd like feedback on if I should try to follow what I see or try to simplify the light to imagine there is just one source of light.

 

 

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I'd like some feedback on how to make the parrot more "alive." I feel like it might be in his eye. My eye looks a bit dull. How do I make it livelier?

 

Jes's drawings - image 2 - student project

 

And my upside down drawing. Something very weird happened at the rabbit's mouth.

Jes's drawings - image 3 - student project