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Inner Child (Final Draft)

Update: 

Hello everyone! So I finally decided to give my script another look (well a few). I changed a few details due to submitting the script to contests. So, it is now an original story, no longer based on the Spoon River. Enjoy! Love any notes that you may have:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5xsgJex2K49MUVfem9aZGdrYkk/view?usp=sharing

                                                                                                                                                                                     

The final draft for "Inner Child":

Logline: A sixteen year old seeks out to a therapist, in hopes to overcome her night terrors of her upsetting past; but when her nightmares become reality, she has the choice to relive the trauma or break the cycle.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B25xei3u62lSaDVaRWUzWUZsWDQ/edit?usp=sharing

                                                                                                                                       

                                                                                                                                     

_____________________________________________________________________________UPDATE (Third Draft): Premise is the same, except I added a nighttmare to the opener, hoping that it gives a better understanding of the protagonist's "call" of the story. I also tweaked the ending and feel a bit happier with the results -- seems, or hoping it does, to validate a survivor's history by having her inner child and adult self become "one" to take down the antagonist. Sorry too for falling behind our your reads. Will catch up ASAP. Would love some feedback IF you get the chance.

Thanks everyone for the first round.

Here is third draft: 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B25xei3u62lSYTZrRFhpSVBiLXc/edit?usp=sharing

                                                                                                                                       

So, I am having a bit of writer's block. I forced myself to just sit and write the story. This is what I have SO FAR (the story centers on the "how to move on" from a dsyfunctional family, as well as sexual assualt):

A sixteen year old seeks out to a therapist, in hopes to overcome her nightmares of her upsetting past; but when her nightmares become reality, she has the choice to relive the trauma or break the cycle.

I know it needs work; but, please feel free to let me know what else needs to be either developed or cut out, etc. I am also a bit torn if the antagonist of the story should be dead or alive from the start.

I apologize if there are any spelling or grammical errors!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B5xsgJex2K49QjZfSXFEaDFhODQ/edit?usp=sharing

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