I'm Only Sleeping

I'm Only Sleeping - student project

4-1-13 UPDATE

Ran out of time, but here's the small things I fixed. It's not where I want it to be, but good enough for now unfortunately. 

I'm Only Sleeping - image 1 - student project

3-27-13 UPDATE

I put everything to illustrator, and am still working on the widths a bit and smoothing everything out, but here's the rough...

I'm Only Sleeping - image 2 - student project

3-25-13 UPDATE

So I redrew it without the 2.44mm pen and used the prisma color pens I'm more used to. I am currently in the process of tracing it in illustrator, but here's what I'm basing it on... 

I'm Only Sleeping - image 3 - student project

3-20-13

I'm Only Sleeping - image 4 - student project

Here's my phrase in honor of the Beatles. It's obviously still rough and touched up a tad in photoshop, but I wanted it to convey a dream-like feeling overall. I'm still trying to get used to the 2.4mm ink pen.

Any thoughts or comments are more than welcome!
Thanks everyone — excited to be on here! :)

Here's some process pictures...

I'm Only Sleeping - image 5 - student project

I'm Only Sleeping - image 6 - student project

I'm Only Sleeping - image 7 - student project