Hispital

First draft:

 

Noah rushed through the cold, sterile hallways of the hospital, ignoring the warnings of the workers for him to slow down; he had to see her. He skid to a halt when a very menacing-looking nurse stodd her ground in front of him.

The project:

Noah rushed through the cold, sterile hallways of the hospital, ignoring the warnings of the workers for him to slow down; he had to see her. The impossible white walls and floors nearly blinded him and the strong, chemical smell almost distracted him from his affliction. He skid to a halt when a very menacing-looking nurse stood her ground in front of him.