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He Ain't Nobody's Fool

He Ain't Nobody's Fool

I am open to suggestions so please feel free to say anything on your mind.

Update: I put up a second draft based on some suggestions I read in the comments. Appreciate the feedback. Keep it coming.

Update: I put another draft of the screenplay based on comments and suggestions. Thanks for the feedback.

Step 1 Selecting Your Text -

I chose a story from The Pastures of Heaven by John Steinbeck because I felt more comfortable adapting a short story rather than a poem.

http://ebooksbeus.weebly.com/uploads/6/3/0/8/6308108/the_pastures_of_heaven_-_john_steinbeck.pdf

Step 2: Drafting Your Screenplay -

Here is the first draft of my screenplay:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9mfNO6KkloaMm8zOXNTYlhmd0U/edit?usp=sharing

Here is the second draft of my screenplay:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9mfNO6KkloaQjEzRDJ4X3NCUHc/edit?usp=sharing

Here is the third draft of my screenplay:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9mfNO6KkloaQjEzRDJ4X3NCUHc/edit?usp=sharing

Here is the fourth draft of my screenplay:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9mfNO6KkloaSy1uLUk3dVBsVGM/edit?usp=sharing

Here is the final draft of my screenplay:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9mfNO6KkloaRW5oMk5FQVRYMjQ/edit?usp=sharing

Step 3: Logline -

A man goes too far in the protection of his daughter and, in the process, ruins his reputation in his idyllic small town.

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