HIVE I - student project

Hi Guys

Uploading my photoshop concotion to the mix and looking for feedback in regards to current point, where it can be taken, all is welcome.  This is only around 30% (only get weekends to work on it) completed from my end concept, but seen as though this is a collaboration course, I figured lets collaborate on the process steps.

As you can see below, I have used one of Coty's images as principle start point and some of Justin's illustrative assest and reworked them to produce the artwork:


HIVE I - image 1 - student project

HIVE I - image 2 - student project


HIVE I - image 3 - student project

Thanks again guys. Look forward to the critique.  

PS.  In the spirit of digital collaboration and want to grow our skillsets if anyone is interested in the PSD photoshop file, just leave a comment and maybe we can get a back and forth reworking of the artwork, to even an artwork chain design going, where we try to build upon an initial piece. :-)