A few small changes. Thanks for the feedback! I gave the two characters a little bit of design. Pushed the contrast a bit. Changed the values on the spur. Added a chair (I am having some trouble adding surrounding elements without breaking the composition and clear read. Tips are most welcome! :) ) 

A new version, still a wip. I tried to add more to the story. I wanted to make the guy in the front the good guy and the guy in the back the bad guy. It still needs some work but I feel that the story is more dramatic and there is more to see. Thank's for all the feedback here and on facebook! 

I took the time to work on one of the sketches. I liked this thumbnail the most so this was the obvious choice for me. Feedback is most welcome and appriciated. 

Before choosing an image I thought I would start with some sketches (and maybe do some more before refining one). I tried different camera angles and different settings and mood. I tried to use contrast and scale to point out the point of focus.

I am pretty new to the whole storytelling thing so I need to work on that a lot but here are my first steps. On to the next ones!